Rinkling twinkling her eyes turned to me,
Got
to the place (her eyes) I want to be.
Sweating
with fear, Had a question in my mind,
Will
she answer it or our friendship will get rewind.
With
fear, I asked her, will you be mine,
Her face
showed an expected positive shine.
Its
that day and this day, we share same smiles,
Her
happiness is where my happiness lies.
P.S.: Nothing real. Just a poem.
Nice one. You have written "with fear, I asked her..."
ReplyDeleteI am wondering if there is love, why fear?
Thanks :). Fear of rejection
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DeleteWow... :D
ReplyDeleteThanks :)
DeleteShort and Cute :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Soham :)
DeleteFor if you love her, why fear...
ReplyDeleteLove is never about conquering, it's about surrendering yourself each moment and enjoying by letting yourself just her way....
Expectations out of love??
Love is never so weak that it gets dependent on rejection..
Yes Nikita, you are right. Love is not about conquering. But I have seen people getting worried(and have fear) about the reply. People think what if he/she in reply says no. This is what i know from 2 male friends and 1 female friend, While writing poem, i was thinking of their experience in my mind :)
DeleteThat is an awesome poem! great work!
ReplyDeleteThanks Rupertt :)
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