14 July 2012

My Love Poem - 2






Rinkling twinkling her eyes turned to me,
Got to the place (her eyes) I want to be.

Sweating with fear, Had a question in my mind,
Will she answer it or our friendship will get rewind.

With fear, I asked her, will you be mine,
Her face showed an expected positive shine.

Its that day and this day, we share same smiles,
Her happiness is where my happiness lies.


P.S.: Nothing real. Just a poem.

11 comments:

  1. Nice one. You have written "with fear, I asked her..."
    I am wondering if there is love, why fear?

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    1. Thanks :). Fear of rejection

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  2. For if you love her, why fear...
    Love is never about conquering, it's about surrendering yourself each moment and enjoying by letting yourself just her way....
    Expectations out of love??
    Love is never so weak that it gets dependent on rejection..

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    1. Yes Nikita, you are right. Love is not about conquering. But I have seen people getting worried(and have fear) about the reply. People think what if he/she in reply says no. This is what i know from 2 male friends and 1 female friend, While writing poem, i was thinking of their experience in my mind :)

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  3. That is an awesome poem! great work!

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14 July 2012

My Love Poem - 2






Rinkling twinkling her eyes turned to me,
Got to the place (her eyes) I want to be.

Sweating with fear, Had a question in my mind,
Will she answer it or our friendship will get rewind.

With fear, I asked her, will you be mine,
Her face showed an expected positive shine.

Its that day and this day, we share same smiles,
Her happiness is where my happiness lies.


P.S.: Nothing real. Just a poem.

11 comments:

  1. Nice one. You have written "with fear, I asked her..."
    I am wondering if there is love, why fear?

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Thanks :). Fear of rejection

      Delete
    2. This comment has been removed by the author.

      Delete
  2. For if you love her, why fear...
    Love is never about conquering, it's about surrendering yourself each moment and enjoying by letting yourself just her way....
    Expectations out of love??
    Love is never so weak that it gets dependent on rejection..

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Yes Nikita, you are right. Love is not about conquering. But I have seen people getting worried(and have fear) about the reply. People think what if he/she in reply says no. This is what i know from 2 male friends and 1 female friend, While writing poem, i was thinking of their experience in my mind :)

      Delete
  3. That is an awesome poem! great work!

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